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this is my alt Please leave comments and hints
this is my alt Please leave comments and hints
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The short walk to the block
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Re: The short walk to the block Tue Oct 18, 2011 4:58 am
Vraal
RP Grandmaster
Holy shit dude. I have a few things to say. First is this is definitely your BEST story yet. Awesome detail, you really got me involved. Your alt is one MEAN mother fucker. It's awesome I cannot WAIT for the next story. One small thing though, start posting in the same thread, no need to make a new thread for the same story. Other than that. AWESOME job!
Also, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing major. I would just recommend going through one more time and reading it to fix them. Great job.
Also, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing major. I would just recommend going through one more time and reading it to fix them. Great job.
3 Re: The short walk to the block Tue Oct 18, 2011 5:00 am
Vraal
RP Grandmaster
I merged your two topics into one, so they should both be in "A walk to the block"
4 Re: The short walk to the block Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:34 am
SimplePlan
Footsoldier
Brutal.Absolutely Brutal.
5 Re: The short walk to the block Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:08 pm
Darthwarth
Footsoldier
Thanks my aim was for blood lust
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