[FEEDBACK]Falls of Rauros, Elven Camp

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Very good with the font and colors...

Very good rp. i also think that the coloured dialogues were impressive

Darthwarth, I belive you haven't read any RP basic guidelines before..

Basically you cannot be a god, who can do anything without caring for what the other side does. Your posts are, to say it roughly, structured so that I, (the opponent), has NO saying to it at all. You should restructure them so that the both parties have an opportunity to do something about the thing. That is a good start for an RP, because fi both parties just throw one-way posts it's going to end up like "orc x kills 100 elves", then a reply: "one elf kills 100 orcs", etc.

It's not fun/even roleplaying, it's GODplaying

I have to agree, try to tone it down a bit, make it more...human like. Your character can THINK he is a god, but he has to get punished in some way for thinking that way.

I have posted in my rules and guides that Godmodding wasn't allowed.

Sorry i did not mean to god mod it This is my first rp battle so yeah sorry for screwing up.

you didnt screw it up man, dont worry

you'll know from now on, and if you have any questions regarding rp do ask, i believe elendil , vraal and i can answer your questions, there are a few more experienced rpers here too, so just ask it out, we're here to firstly have fun and secondly learn more anyway

btw darth what is the position of your forces?

My troops were near vraals force, away from yours

near were you attacked Damn i am geting confused i thourght you were going for me i will get rid of post '

You can just edit it, no worries

Wow, insane action going on at the North. Don't worry, some of my troops are coming to Rohan