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[Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank.
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Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:37 am
Vraal
RP Grandmaster
That is very well written, my only comment would be to add more to the fight scene...but that's just me, I like lots of action haha. Very good though, I'm looking forward to your next story 
3 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:53 am
Gilrain Ialdhan
Initiate
I extended the describing of the short action part
Just for you
Just for you
4 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:08 pm
Elendil
RP Grandmaster
Very good RP my friend.
5 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:56 am
Vraal
RP Grandmaster
Gilrain Ialdhan wrote:I extended the describing of the short action part
Just for you
Haha nice!
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