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[Feedback] Banks of the river Iden

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1[Feedback] Banks of the river Iden Empty [Feedback] Banks of the river Iden Mon Oct 17, 2011 1:38 am

Moridin

Moridin
Peasant
Peasant

The RP

I would appreciate any critique I can get on this RP. I'm struggling a bit with my characterisation in the next portion, and was hoping for any tips I could get based on this snippet.

Thanks!

2[Feedback] Banks of the river Iden Empty Re: [Feedback] Banks of the river Iden Mon Oct 17, 2011 1:41 am

Elendil

Elendil
RP Grandmaster
RP Grandmaster

Well, it certainly intrigued my interest. It was overall, pretty good, but it could have used more depth and more detail to it. I am really looking forward to your next RP.

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3[Feedback] Banks of the river Iden Empty Re: [Feedback] Banks of the river Iden Mon Oct 17, 2011 3:08 am

Vraal

Vraal
RP Grandmaster
RP Grandmaster

Very well written man. I don't really have anything to critique. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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