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The urk

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1 The urk on Sun Oct 16, 2011 8:06 pm

Darthwarth

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any comments or tips to improve?

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2 Re: The urk on Sun Oct 16, 2011 8:08 pm

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More depth and words this time. Not a masterpiece, but good.

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3 Re: The urk on Mon Oct 17, 2011 3:02 am

Vraal

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Definitly better than your first. You are improving. Minor grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing terrible. Awesome job man...Killing a poor uruk though Sad

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