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[Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank.

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1 [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. on Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:16 am

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2 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. on Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:37 am

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That is very well written, my only comment would be to add more to the fight scene...but that's just me, I like lots of action haha. Very good though, I'm looking forward to your next story Smile

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3 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. on Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:53 am

I extended the describing of the short action part Smile

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4 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. on Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:08 pm

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Very good RP my friend.

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5 Re: [Feedback] Skirmish at the Riverbank. on Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:56 am

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Gilrain Ialdhan wrote:I extended the describing of the short action part Smile

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Haha nice!

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